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In terms of your writing style, you might get a comment like this if the essay marker found your writing either boring or in a style inappropriate to the context of a formal essay finally, looks matter: use a sensible, easy-to-read font, print with good-quality ink and paper if you’re printing, and write neatly and legibly if you’re. If you liked this essay, thank you for commenting it sounds like you have a strong writing background how did you develop this and what suggestions do you have for others to do the same. Read them all the way through before commenting on the draft so that you know the direction the essay is going b e especially alert for essays that are off topic and engage the essay draft with a critical eye. Before giving your written comments to the author, reread your comments to make sure they are clear and make sense as a peer reviewer, your job is not to provide answers you raise questions the writer makes the choices.